Comments on: About Us http://www.alteredfluid.com Home of the Altered Fluid writers group Sat, 12 Jun 2010 12:26:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc By: Livia Llewellyn http://www.alteredfluid.com/about-us/comment-page-1/#comment-4581 Livia Llewellyn Tue, 23 Feb 2010 03:02:36 +0000 http://www.alteredfluid.com/?page_id=2#comment-4581 Well, I'm pretty sure the Altered Fluid members know how to spell. I've certainly seen THAT in their work... Well, I’m pretty sure the Altered Fluid members know how to spell. I’ve certainly seen THAT in their work…

]]> By: 12-string Frank http://www.alteredfluid.com/about-us/comment-page-1/#comment-4259 12-string Frank Sat, 23 Jan 2010 22:27:22 +0000 http://www.alteredfluid.com/?page_id=2#comment-4259 You can give all the critiques and "constructive" advice you want to the writer, and the story might still not get published, or the book (if it gets published) might get a negative review. I don't see what makes you guyd such authorities on writing advice. I just know that if a has a good character with an interesting conflict, and the scenes hve action, and the characters are DOING things instead of mulling over their lives, then you will some good writing. I'm not sure if see that in Alt. Fl. work. You can give all the critiques and “constructive” advice you want to the writer, and the story might still not get published, or the book (if it gets published) might get a negative review.

I don’t see what makes you guyd such authorities on writing advice. I just know that if a has a good character with an interesting conflict, and the scenes hve action, and the characters are DOING things instead of mulling over their lives, then you will some good writing. I’m not sure if see that in Alt. Fl. work.

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