Novel Sale!
I’m happy to report that last week I sold my first novel to Pyr Books, a young adult work titled Fair Coin.
Naturally I owe many thanks to the other members of Altered Fluid, who all did an incredible job with an early, messy draft. Critiquing a novel is practically an art, and it requires a lot of time and effort to do it right. Kris Dikeman even graphed the action in the manuscript to show me where the plot and pacing needed the most work, one of the most sobering experiences of my career so far. I joke about that legendary crit a lot, but it really was helpful–and I look forward to returning the favor one day soon. (Soon, Kris…)
I can’t emphasize enough the value of solid first readers to steer or shove your stories in the right direction, and offer healthy amounts of encouragement and reality as needed. Thanks, guys!





Altered Fluid is a speculative fiction writing group based in Manhattan. We have been meeting bi-monthly or more often since 2001.